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Wouldnt it be easier to let go
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Wouldnt it be easier to let go |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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i see you walk past i tingle with a frustration only depression can handle i bite my lip in anxiety i pinch my arm wishing you werent such a god i melt as you turn toward me i smile as if the wound inside me has healed without a mark nor scar i watch you sit down next to me i slip my hands underneath myself fearing they might linger if you come any closer i look deeply into your eyes i search for a story and a life behind such beauty i laugh at your jokes i pour my bear heart out in front of you without thinking i see your face change i wished i hadnt seen your expression turn to sympathy i take my hands away from beneath me i turn away in embarrasment as you reach you hand and rest it on my back i melt for a moment at the contact i flinch away knowing i don't need the pity i stand up and walk away i hear your questioning footsteps behind me Wouldn't it be easier to let you in? Wouldn't it be easier to let you take me in your arms and caress my sodden heart? But wouldnt it be easier to let you walk away? i accept your touch I let you in i let you take me in your caressing arms But i dont let you walk away I turn my head instead and stare into your eyes I dont allow myself to trip deep into their pools of darkness I let them read mine And i let them close with a single tear falling down your godlike face Wouldnt it be easier to let go? Wouldnt it be easier to let you take me? But wouldnt it be easier to tell you i loved you, and walk away? *This one was so hard for me. I brought all my emotion together to say what i thought about things that dont work out. I know heaps of people feeling this way at the moment but this one is especially dedicated to two of my closest friends struggling like this at the moment. (B and S) Love you always guys LOR* In the bible on angels have wings, and the rest must wait to be saved - Jewel |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
This was very emotional. I could just tell from the poem that this came from your heart. Very amazing write. I love your poems. ~Vampire Kisses  I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
omg laura. i havent cried since wen me n ***** broke up and now its all come. i wish i called you cus you wont beleive me but i am actually sobbing. this is the most amazing poem i ahve HONESTLY EVER READ I AM NOT JUST SAYING THAT CHICA U KNOW ITS TRUE. because you have this amazing talent and gift to be able to write down exactly wat someone, wether it be yourself or me or anyone is feeling exactly. you knwo thats exactly how i feel, even though i never knew it. you have made me realise me own feelings. ive lied to myself and so many people, but thanks to that poem im facing facts. i love you soooooo much laura! thank you so much for that. i have been able to cry, and god know's why you like it. im hurting bad right now. i cant thank you enough. i miss you so much laura its unbelieveable. luv ya chica ur mate forvever and ever sophie/batman/darkness/ethel(cringe)/soph. You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
sophie thankyou a million and one times i really need to talk to u and hear ur voice that was sooooooo amazing that u almost made me cry thank YOU sophie love you for everything and always LOR In the bible on angels have wings, and the rest must wait to be saved - Jewel |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Awesome write, I could feel the pain in this one, only wish there was an answer as to why people have such hard core feelings. |
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