Welcome To My Dreams - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Poetry #4

Welcome To My Dreams

The_Nameless_One
Member

since 2007-01-20

Posts 165
Missouri

0 posted 2007-10-20 10:15 AM

Blood is like water
under the sun.
My time here is short
but i will have fun.

Come into the darkness
of my echoing dreams.
We will push and pull
at the itchy seams.

Insane laughter
is all you will hear.
Hold on to your life
and all you hold dear.

Coming up short
on one string you say.
It won't be long
you will die today.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-10-20 12:36 PM

oh wow this was so amazing the flow was good... I loved it.. all
Krysti

Twilight Warrior
Member

since 2007-02-22

Posts 106
The World That Never Was

2 posted 2007-10-20 04:59 PM

This was cool.....maybe i'll invite you to my dreams one day. -TW

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

3 posted 2007-10-25 09:02 PM

You are a truly talented individual. I really love the 'itchy seams'.... it reminds me of that feeling in my mind when I'm reaching for something but just can't grab it!

Verg
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 52
Colorado

4 posted 2007-10-26 10:22 PM

it scared me at first, but iread it again and well...what cani say i LOVE IT.

plz read my poem Flames.ML

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

5 posted 2007-10-26 10:33 PM

I must agree, this was very good.

The_Nameless_One
Member

since 2007-01-20

Posts 165
Missouri

6 posted 2007-10-28 07:03 PM

thank you everyone this is the first poem i have wrote in a while that had that feeling of being right for a change so glad you enjoyed it and hopefully my crazy mind will spew out more goodies in the future

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.