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Dark Poetry #4

Frustrated

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-11-27 10:43 PM

Only when the brain is wet does it function properly
Crystal hard and solid, pure as gold

This day my mind dictates
I'm pulled inside out
I hear the screams of someone dying
Someone who doesn't try
Someone who doesn't care
Its like the world falls apart,
piece by piece,
chunk by chunk,
Its falling
Ouch in this spot where it lands

Lack of hope, control, faith
It feels like dying
Burning from the inside
Roasted
Cooked in this pot of swollen doubt

Concentrate
Think
Draw it in
I can see

Grab this image
And mold it
Make it fit
To understanding
Exact or nothing
In the clearer view of what you see

Struggle, transmutate, disection of yourself
On display for an empty mind critique of poor judgement
Honest display of what should be

I just want understanding from rambled thoughts to understand the understood faith borne broken dying
Give it a lift and let it live.

Closed will remain closed until opened.

[I try hard to have a father, but instead I had a dad...]- Kurt Cobain

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

1 posted 2003-11-27 10:48 PM

painful and exactly crafted.

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

2 posted 2003-11-27 11:30 PM

Solid...Painfull. I like it.

- River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

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