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Dark Poetry #4
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buckysimone
Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 27
0 posted 2003-11-19 10:15 PM


why
don't you throw out
your hand
will everything
be alright
your smile seems so far
so distant
so free
when can i
can i touch your lips
i'd love
love it to see you smile
the sounds
violins
scratching
the board
why
im reaching
your dragging
im bruising
im losing
why
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beckers716
Junior Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 39
Ohio
1 posted 2003-11-20 02:05 AM

Very nicely written! I hope to be reading more of your poems soon

Only when all hope seems lost, can you hope to find yourself
Hockeychick19
Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA
2 posted 2003-11-21 04:57 PM

Nice write.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!
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