Wall of Will and of Desire

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Dark Poetry #4

Wall of Will and of Desire

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-11-18 01:37 AM

Almost blind by this confusion
My upper forehead starts to bleed
This impenetrable flame of knowledge blisters my flesh
I can smell and hear it cooking

My flimsy lower torso doesnt hold me up
Inside my mind the information from my heart resides
The best

I can
My fathers frisbe of advice hurts my feelings
But he's nothing.
I know

My lack of financial power burdens my free will
All things are possible

The only way around is through
The cross-hairs line up perfectly in my head
This mountainous stone wall is not
Id move before it fell.

This wall is not

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[I try hard to have a father, but instead I had a dad...]- Kurt Cobain

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-11-18 05:19 PM

Itchy this is a hurtful place be. Sending a hug.

Love,
Terri~

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2003-11-18 10:46 PM

i think the title is too gody {no pun intended}. Its too rich. The poem's about learning all this crap on guitar right now.

GIS

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[I try hard to have a father, but instead I had a dad...]- Kurt Cobain

eor
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since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2003-11-20 11:18 PM

"My lack of financial power burdens my free will
All things are possible"

i feel like this every day, enjoyed the write...

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

4 posted 2003-11-21 11:40 AM

I can
My fathers frisbe of advice hurts my feelings
But he's nothing.
I know

powerful content, Enjoyed.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

5 posted 2003-11-21 03:35 PM

Thanx.

GIS

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[I try hard to have a father, but instead I had a dad...]- Kurt Cobain

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