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coyote
Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077


0 posted 2003-11-04 07:58 PM



I am a certifiable cyberian
wearing the key to insanity
upon my sleeve
like an organ donor
rejecting the final transplant

because the recipient
was swallowing heart worms
on “reality TV”
where bimbos and bozos
flush their brains
into the sewers
beneath the coliseum
of modern entertainment

online word wails
spew from arterial wounds
expunging the pain
ejaculating angst
across the faces
of fellow seekers
of no attention

spans, or deficits?

methinks neither

merely
unguinal gesture
in disguise
between the lines
inferred surmise

behind closed doors
IM sojourns
intercourses le Internet
in alleys rife
with cyber life

transmitting
electronic AIDS
behind “Psycho”
shower curtains
through
keyboard shades

sucking the life
out of a blinking
neon breast

seeking juice
from circuits
mother
never switched

through switches
father
never tripped

a microfficial
archived
identity

mi vida loca

© Copyright 2003 coyote - All Rights Reserved
mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

1 posted 2003-11-05 10:48 AM


Outstanding wit, nice job with this. Enjoyed.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

coyote
Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077

2 posted 2003-11-05 06:10 PM


Thanks for the read, poe.
Sometimes, we cyberians just have to say to ourselves:
"Get a freakin' life!"

Ya know?  heheh

But then, I suck anywayz, compared to those who post in the thousands, lol.

coyote 8)


[This message has been edited by coyote (11-05-2003 09:03 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-11-08 12:54 PM


neat write...enjoyed
coyote
Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077

4 posted 2003-11-08 04:19 PM


Thanks again, passing shadows.
Glad ya liked it and could relate to the "self-inflicted" humor.

coyote 8)

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