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Xeonox
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0 posted 2005-11-06 06:48 PM



I been stuck in this lust life,
Feeling my head with each sin,
As these thoughts bleed my mind,
Even though u feel the same test,
I want to resist this fate,

I know it is a small thing to you,
But for me it is my life on the grind,
Can’t fail now that I have seen the fame,
Deep inside my heart, I know its wrong,

Just have to find the right life line,
Hang onto it till the end of time,
Please forgive me for my sinful acts,
For I am young buck, who knows no better,
I often lead solo, for I fear my shadow,

Besides writing and contemplating,
The only good thing I do is sinning,
Until the end of life, I can’t live like this,
Help me conquer my fears,
Now don’t tell me I am right or wrong,

Just let me be and help me when in need,
I see closer to my sins than you know,
Beat myself with each thought,
Hurt so many without thinking first,
Once again, I ask for forgiveness,
For a sinner of the deepest kind,
The seventh circle, my new home.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
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1 posted 2005-11-09 12:50 PM


step right up, step right up for a ride down to the deepest ring of hell. I enjoyed this piece very much though I would have went about it's construction a bit differently but then we all have our own styles.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Xeonox
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2 posted 2005-11-09 03:08 PM


That is why we each have our own style.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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