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sunsetgun
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since 2005-07-17
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0 posted 2005-07-17 05:47 PM





She's got Knives for fingers and blades on the edge of her hands
Her eyes are beacons of fire,to fan the flames of your desire
dark hair thats a rusted pile of bloody razor wire
her voice whispers like a silenced gun ,2 rounds chambered in her lungs..
with one word ,she could kill you dead ,a head full of lead.
this infernal machine don't need gasoline she'll use a little of your fire to make some steam  . don't you hear that steady piston  pumping molten metal through her system ?

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Savage Quiescence
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Wandering
1 posted 2005-07-26 12:54 PM


Certainly not your average write. I like the imagery. Keep writing.

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sunsetgun
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2 posted 2005-07-26 12:14 PM


Version 2 is on the way
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