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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-04-03 07:59 PM



Craw in, come see
The little lights dancing freely
A beautiful show
Errotic dancers purring tease

Fine rich lavish
Gorgeous drip on a heavy tongue
Take as desired
Compel no more

Statue promise golden idol
Promise commend
Clipper fingers slow in touch
Predict the "tell all" future

Just a game of trivial tests
Paraphrase: "the great Satan;
God is dead;..."
A horrid stench of rotten lies

Drain you, make you
Program forget
A dim light with the batteries lit
Burnout, the batteries were fake too

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Mad_Hatter
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1 posted 2005-04-05 02:41 AM


I like the last stanza in particular, I think I see what you're saying with this one
green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2005-04-06 09:48 PM


thank you.

-GIS

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

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