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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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0 posted 2005-03-31 09:55 PM



We're star born beings
Death premiss
We choke on bliss

Freaks set apart
A change of heart
Inside my heart
The world, set apart
Holding too

My hands move faster than my brain
Load of notes and answers
Scriptic words that flow

Intricate dedicate human beings
New fields for planting seeds

Voices gather inside my head
Open with hate demon this
Clearly they fear a twirling pen

Given parameters who you are
Oddest walls on narrow pass
Death the easy, and life comes last

These awkward people, tall are such things
Soaked version of the test
Care for love and not the rest

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
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California
1 posted 2005-04-05 11:52 AM


i like it.
i like the rhyme because it seems natural.

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2005-04-06 09:50 PM


Thank you Lexy.

-GIS

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

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