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Dark Poetry #4

Thought you saw this...

Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2004-12-05 10:32 PM

As you sit there
Overlooking the obvious
I stare into your eyes of lost feeling
Hopeless regrets
Desolate days
And an anger that couldn't make you feel
Did you see me there?
What hurt really lay there?
Saying nothing to me
You took your life
Packed it up neatly
and left without a trace

Love,
Ladycat

"Everything changes, everything stays the same."-Bill Austin

stevebrklynnyc
Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 292
GA, Camden

1 posted 2004-12-06 05:43 PM

As you sit there
Overlooking the obvious
I stare into your eyes of lost feeling
Hopeless regrets

The whole write was touching and hits home closer than I wanted. These lines were very strong. Enjoyed.

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