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All you need is love
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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it's the one thing that you get out of bed for the one feeling that makes you sleep tight the thing you whisper in your mind all you need is love it's the one thing that makes you smile the only thing you think about the thing you write about all you need is love it's the thing that tickles your stomach the thing that makes you smile its the thing you scribble all over your books all you need is love it's the thing that makes you worried sick the one thing that rips away at yor heart the thing that makes you cry yourself to sleep all you need is love its the one thing you wipe your eyes over the one thing that bleeds you dry the thing that makes you want to scream all you need is love the one thing you can't handle the only thing that makes you feel so ugly the thing that makes you insane makes you drive the blade into your flesh Yeah, all you need is love. your the only one keeping me alive |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Yeah, all you need is love. "Love. Whether it warms your heart or burns your house down, you can never tell." "You are beautiful, no matter what they say, words can't bring you down." I found this written on some randoms book in music, sorry if it's long. "A professor gave his class of ten female and ten male students, a sentance: Women without men are nothing. He asked the students to punctuate the sentance. The men wrote 'Women without men, are nothing.' The women wrote 'Women! Without; men are nothing.'" Good poem Lor. Loved the irony as always. Beautiful. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
Iloved this, I think, because I know EXACTLY how it goes for the first time in my life. And you described it so well. And it'll drive me to a knife once in a while, but I think it's worth the pain. You've got to weight the good against the bad, see how they balance, and then make some adjustments. That's my way of doing it anyway, if that helps any? "World's use is cold, world's love is vain, world's cruelty is bitter bane; but is not the fruit of pain." Elizabeth Barrett Browning [This message has been edited by PainBaneChaos (11-25-2004 09:25 AM).] |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
geez girl i envy you so much, ive tried writing this one so many times but yeah never worked but of course you wipped out the goold ol' irony and made it so "LOR"! im in the situation you wrote about and have been for so long. "Love will carry you through any difficulties" - this was in a fortune cookie i got.... i read it then burnt it. "Love is my ultimate weakness" - way true everything you wrote applies to me so much... love and empathy (For empathy can save us all) darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Love is confusing sometimes, and God is love. lol. But it all makes sense in the end, or at least it... nevermind. I loved the poem. -GIS add Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
This was amazing. I can relate sooo much. I agree with everyone on this one. Keep them coming and keep them this completely amazing! Im adding. Kissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
"...it's the thing that tickles your stomach the thing that makes you smile..." I really started smiling at that part lol...this is really great, I liked it a lot, a lot! ~*brezee*~ |
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NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England |
"the one thing you can't handle the only thing that makes you feel so ugly the thing that makes you insane makes you drive the blade into your flesh Yeah, all you need is love." This part is cool and sums up love in my eyes, its confusing and god its hard. I can relate to this, well written hun. Luv NightFall "My only love sprung from my only hate to early seen unkown and known to late" Romeo and juliet- William shakespere. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
love is neither black nor white, it just is. i loved this poem and your point of showing both the ups and downs of love, that to have love is to have everything and nothing at the same time. p.s this kept reminding me of Moulin Rouge just because of the song line you decided to use, which is always a good thing. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
p.s x2: you are just the sweetest thing in the world, i can't believe you remember that poem, i wrote it around last year lol, but i adore you for that. from what i've read of your work so far you're just as good if not better than myself  |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
it was so great thats why. i printed it off at the time, its just such a great piece of writing. u shud write more more often! LOR you're the only one keeping me alive |
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angele Junior Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 35Malta (tiny island in the Med) |
amazingly gorgeous !!! it sums up the two sides of the feeling we call love...the good and the bad, the ugly and the beautiful. your wordd truly capture how something that seems so great and turn incredibly sour in an instant..in just a matter of a stanza... |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Love Is All We Need, But It's Also Something Very Hard To Come By, Excellent Poem, I Loved It... |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
(edited-profanity-Ladycat) *speechless* dude, that was so brilliant... soo soo soo good. if you could improve on anything though.. ..i would suggest retitling. it gives a cheesy impression, on a brilliant, uncheesy poem. lots of love, Kurst Pride is holding your head up, when everyone else has their's lowered. Courage is what makes you do it. [This message has been edited by Ladycat (12-16-2004 08:26 PM).] |
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