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KuruShio
Member

since 2003-11-18

Posts 110

0 posted 2004-11-14 11:14 PM

Summer of Sam
Winter of mine
Brow like a god
A hand full of time
Shall we be?
Forever me
Inside a seed
That bleeds
And bleeds
My shelter a shoulder
My eye a beholder
Of pain and agony
Of sighing misery
A greater evil
A greater good
A vote
A voice
No chance no choice
My vision my clarity
Ripped, torn from me
Useless ammunition
For a greater fiend
That chooses, that rends
My ties
My friends
I hate
I bleed
But still
That seed
That traps
That conceals
I beg, I appeal
For release
For freedom.

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.
KuruShio (DeadlyBob)

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2004-11-15 12:05 PM

Freedom can cost if you want. Or it can be free...

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

2 posted 2004-11-17 01:21 PM

I thought this lost something half-way through, but is still a terrific poem. Something changed midway, though. Still very library worthy. Thanks for sharing.

NightFall
Member

since 2004-01-28

Posts 88
The land known as England

3 posted 2004-11-17 01:24 PM

Freedom isnt something we have its something we are given, everybody has to fight for theirs.

"My only love sprung from my only hate to early seen unkown and known to late" Romeo and juliet- William shakespere.

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

4 posted 2004-11-22 05:18 AM

Interesting..

And I agree, freedom does have a cost..but it's generally worth fighting for.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-11-22 08:10 PM

Love this, as someone else said, very library worthy.

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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

6 posted 2004-12-16 09:01 PM

there you go... you've got it back i see!

awesome stuff

LOR

you're the only one keeping me alive

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

7 posted 2004-12-17 02:04 AM

hehe does anyone else notice the wicked shape of that poem!!!??

yeah i liked it, but it drifted for awhile.

nice ending

love and empathy
sophie

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

A Tone of Voice
Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 287

8 posted 2004-12-17 02:39 PM

Nothing ain't worth nothing, but it's free--and to be free is a fallacy unless of course it's within our minds, and that can never be taken from us, regardless.

thought provoking your words, enjoyed!

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