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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden 
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The time was then We both could see A promise of tomorrow I wish it could be My shell is an open book now All can tell A fake smile, put on for them Transparent am I Loathing coupled with pitty Followed by anger No excuses for this empty soul The past follows my darkness Deceit helped me move along No angel above to catch the mistrust Guilty visions wreck this controlled havoc No reason to keep trying, no one will listen With help she pulled away Blindly steering this unrelenting path Too late for words now Empty meaning of substance flows through Should have taken that walk on the beach Perception is fake without sincerity One day will carry over to the next Hopefully the future will tag along Old beginnings seer my skin Scars left in the past are my sin |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
A pause of awe and wow. Nice write. That angel you missed was there though. Maybe you just didn't find it, but there is a reason though. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Thank you. No, the angel was there, I just let her pass by. Just add it to life and the lessons that are all to real. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I understand that one, and I guess if you look at it it turns out to have had a reason after all. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
"Perception is fake without sincerety" They've just added this to the greatest of great lines of all time. Voltaire is smiling! A refreshing style of poetry. I dug it. Rider |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Very much love the feedback, Steve. |
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