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southern sweetheart Junior Member
since 2003-12-28
Posts 18 |
hug me when im sad beat me when im bad tuck me into bed so im not scared dad then show up late , its just bad fate give me kisses and hugs beat me till im black and blue give me flowers to show you care break my arm , show no fear hold my head up when things get bad then bury me the next day dad [This message has been edited by southern sweetheart (10-17-2004 02:25 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
incredibly sad  no, that is not the way to be tucked into bed, my dear |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I'm not sure what to say. Sad. Brief. Thats an awesome poem. Its sound all the way through. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I do understand, this is a good place to vent. Slow, deep breaths . . . *smile* |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Sad, But Great Poem... I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~ |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
"And may your true Father show you, Dad, how to be a better one in your next life" God, vent it through poetry, sweetheart. A sad reality to many of us. Thank you for sharing this! "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
sad...powerful...not a way someone should be treated.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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