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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2003-11-24 07:57 AM



All is Changed

You have changed the way my eyes have viewed the earth
You have given thoughts new meaning, depth and worth
All is different, every word has been immersed
In you, before it spilled into this humble verse

Every dream and venture that was long pursued
Shines in rolling waters beauteously  imbued
Emerald, sapphire, azure, teal and cerulean
By you, whose eyes have taught my eyes new ways to dream

Every soul has been transformed into a child
Every heart is viewed as tender, meek and mild
Everyone is now endowed a  second birth
By you, whose gentle ways have changed perception’s worth

Love has altered everything I do and say
Love has changed the way I think, the way I pray
Faltering wings were taught a different way to fly
By you, who’ve giv’n this soul a better way to die

Elizabeth Santos
11/24/03  

© Copyright 2003 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-11-24 08:14 AM



Thank that special person for me...
it has brought you out to pen again...


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2 posted 2003-11-24 08:33 AM


Beautiful dear lady..
and it is SO good to be reading you once again.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-11-24 08:52 AM


Elizabeth,
Only you could write this.

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4 posted 2003-11-24 09:39 AM


Oh, my! I got all emotional reading your loving poem of gratitude and inspiration. You have been missed Lady Liz!

Happy hugs,
Linda

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5 posted 2003-11-24 12:40 PM


I too thank him every day for all the blessing he has given me too.  Liz, this was incredibly beautiful, and very heartfelt.
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6 posted 2003-11-24 04:05 PM


This is classic Elizabeth... which means incredibly beautiful. *S*
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7 posted 2003-12-18 02:11 AM


sooooooooo special a read this is...
sooooooooo precious a write you've shared...

Smiles2uPoetFriendElizabeth
*~coco~*

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8 posted 2003-12-18 07:07 AM


Liz - everything you write you write so well.  This is another example of the wonderful poet you are.
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-12-18 06:23 PM


Lovely...James
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10 posted 2003-12-18 07:40 PM


Liz, a beautiful write as always

M

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11 posted 2003-12-18 08:13 PM


Lia, it is a pleasure to read your words once again. This is beautiful, as always.
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12 posted 2003-12-19 02:35 PM


This is so lovely... especially the last verse! *S*
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