I can¡¯t leave a bird in my dream

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Open Poetry #30

I can¡¯t leave a bird in my dream

chinesestone
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since 2003-06-04

Posts 76
China

0 posted 2003-12-08 01:32 AM

I can¡¯t leave a bird in my dream
Like I can not detain the losing days and trees
Close whth the norther sandstorm
How sadness it is
My love and me went astray in a river together
And we swear we will not be back
But thoses wallows and peachblossom in that spring
Still come on time
Show the same temperature and details
But,I can not relate the losing case
For example,some feather
The death of that fish
Some rose fall into the sky stop
Turn to blue

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-12-08 02:19 AM

hello again, friend

There are some things we cannot change
But maybe that's a good thing?

happy to see you

chinesestone
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 76
China

2 posted 2003-12-08 02:48 AM

i had not come here about 6 months.
may be some friend had forgot me, so i show the poem again ,to wake you.

wishes.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2003-12-08 06:46 PM

chinesetone,

   I really like this part:

I can¡¯t leave a bird in my dream
Like I can not detain the losing days and
   trees
Close with the norther sandstorm

   I admire you for writing in English.  I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

                            Sadelite

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-12-08 06:47 PM

Enjoyed...James

Martie

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5 posted 2003-12-08 08:19 PM

I like this, chinestone!

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