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Open Poetry #30

Let You

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-12-05 02:42 PM

I can't stand myself
When I'm around you.
Alone, I'm strong.
I'm alive
And my heart is beating.
I tell you to leave
20 times over in my head.

But then you're there
My hand in yours
My soul
In your eyes
Looking back
And I double over
And give up
And let you kiss me.

duckysgirl
Junior Member

since 2003-11-19

Posts 26
Down South

1 posted 2003-12-05 02:45 PM

Believe me KoKo...i know the feeling!!!

Duckysgirl

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

2 posted 2003-12-05 02:49 PM

Thank you, ducky

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

3 posted 2003-12-05 11:45 PM

"But then you're there
My hand in yours
My soul
In your eyes"

you have captured this ache perfectly! i love reading you, yanno?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-12-06 03:10 AM

doesn't it make ya wanna scream?

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

5 posted 2003-12-06 04:03 AM

Sometimes we just can't help ourselves, even though we try....enjoyed this one tremendously....~S~

Life is what you make it
Don't let it make you...

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

6 posted 2003-12-08 12:29 PM

Thanks, guys

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