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exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-12-04 10:46 PM

my love for you
is burning a hole in me
will i ever get that back?
i thought love was suppose to complete you
not leave you feeling
empty..
bring on the construction paper
i'm gonna need something
to hide this hole
to hide these feelings
i need to cover them up
before they spill
all over the floor
all over your shirt
don't let me ruin your day
with my stupidity
i'll clean up these feelings before you even notice they were ever there
before you even notice i was ever here...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-12-05 12:31 PM

ouch
better make it a double piece of paper
that sounds like a bad, bad burn
but a good emote

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-12-05 03:57 AM

owie owie

this hurts

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-12-06 05:17 AM

Stupidity? It's not stupid to feel love. Just because they may not return it doesn't make the love you feel a bad thing, and anyone that makes you feel that is lacking something. Even if they don't return that love it's still not something to ridicule, or mock in any way. That's sad. Sending a hug.

Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-12-08 01:14 PM

i need to cover them up
before they spill
all over the floor
all over your shirt
don't let me ruin your day
with my stupidity

This is a beautiful contstruction, reminds me of paper hearts that hold no weight. Nicely done exhale~

jamesjiao
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon

5 posted 2003-12-14 07:12 PM

This is simply sublime... I am sure how you feel is shared by many (especially guys), me being one of them

. I am just wondering if you are a male?

It's not stupid to love somebody, exhale. To me, if you love that person, she's worth your affection. I know that sometimes they never tend to notice you. It's not easy to forget, but it's possible... And I agree with you, do it before you spill it all over their shirt. It is hard when you hurt someone you love because YOU LOVE him/her.

Nice write!!!

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.

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