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Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member

since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

0 posted 2003-12-04 06:46 PM

Something special and sweet,
give me something make me complete.

Touch somplace I've never felt,
It's been along time since the melt.

I stand in water I'm ready,
For the electricty I'll be steady.

Touch me and make it real,
Show me how you feel.

Read me words composed by you,
Of feelings sound and true.

Touch my heart if you can.....

The sweetest rose is one you'll die for...

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2003-12-04 06:52 PM

speak...I hear, I listen to words from the heart....beautiful!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (12-04-2003 06:53 PM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2003-12-04 07:27 PM

Seems like you're lookeing for a shocking experience with all that electricity and water mix, still the poem's sensitive and lovely.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-12-04 07:38 PM

Touch somplace I've never felt,
It's been along time since the melt.

I stand in water I'm ready,
For the electricty I'll be steady.

Touch me and make it real,
Show me how you feel.

When a person is in love with just the right one and the chemistry between the two is just right, it DOES feel like electricity! LOL

Hugs

Ethel

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

4 posted 2003-12-05 05:40 AM

Touch my heart if you can.....
it really touches my heart.

Fire Fairy
Junior Member

since 2003-10-22

Posts 43
Australia

5 posted 2003-12-05 05:47 AM

You are so right.

How that electric feeling is the most luscious experience ever. I'm so greatful, like you I have been blessed enough to fell THAT feeling in the past!

Beautifully sensual and passionately written. I really enjoyed this piece. Thank you for sharing your romantic experience. I hope you feel THAT feeling again soon!

Keep overflowing your feelings into words. This poem was a moving piece of art...

Love and light
Fire Fairy

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