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Kethry
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0 posted 2003-12-03 04:52 PM


My faith is weak
The road is long
But still I seek
To sing your song
I'm not complete
When things go wrong
When I am weak
Then you are strong

My tears will fall
For life bears cost
And to this squall
I am storm tossed
But through it all
I'm never lost
Though faith may stall
It's yet God crossed

Although I fear
This life goes on
And you draw near
To lead beyond
I hold you dear
And faith I don
I pray - you hear
Then strength is born

My faith is weak
But present still
And I will seek
To do your will
Each day we'll speak
I'll pray until
No longer bleak
I pass this ill

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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PsychoticBunni
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1 posted 2003-12-03 05:08 PM


i loved it. everyone feels a time in their life when they are scared and unsure. It's good that you have that special someone to hold on to.

Meg

tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying.
-Mel Brooks

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2 posted 2003-12-03 05:09 PM


Darlin'Kethry~
Such a prayerful piece from your heart~
And a GOOD heart it is~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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just out of reach
3 posted 2003-12-03 06:19 PM


This is lovely Kethry. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

Aimster
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4 posted 2003-12-04 06:02 AM


beautiful Keth, but then again your poems
always are! such hope in this, makes the
heart smile
take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Ericc
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5 posted 2003-12-04 09:26 AM


What a perfect rhythm and flow with a beautiful message!

Eric

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Beneath the northern stars
6 posted 2003-12-04 11:59 AM


I'm with you girl....I've been weak lately but am growing stronger....hang in there and God will provide.

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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7 posted 2003-12-04 01:06 PM


A beautiful write from a beautiful heart. *S*
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2003-12-04 03:28 PM


A very touching heart song...

Healing hugs,
EA

Opeth
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The Ravines
9 posted 2003-12-05 06:42 AM


The metering seems near perfect... This was no doubt from your heart ~ enjoyed!
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