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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-12-01 05:54 PM


    
Picture by Josephine Wall

* * *

I wrote this for a friend named Lisa who
lost her father to cancer four months ago.
She is having trouble dealing with her
loss and I have offered my shoulder to
her as I have been through the same thing
and know how difficult it is.I wrote
this in the hope that it may help her in
the grieving process and I plan to give
it to her this week.

* * *

I have been in your position
And I know just how you feel
Some days can be a struggle
And life can seem so surreal

Time can be the greatest healer
This I know to be true
As I share my own experience
Through these words I write for you

His spirit will never leave you
Remember the good times you had
No one can take away the love
You still hold for your dear Dad

'tho some days you may feel angry
It's so important to release
Only then will you find
The road to inner peace

He will always be around you
You might feel him in the breeze
He will comfort you in sadness
And he may whisper through the trees

You may see his reflection
In a gently flowing stream
Or he may be closest to you
When you close your eyes and dream

He's still a big part of your life
He is the brightest star at night
For now and all eternity
He will remain your guiding light

Hold tightly to your memories
For they will help to get you through
Just call me if you need me
And I will be there for you

* * *

"We are all angels with only one wing,
we can fly only by embracing each other"


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins


[This message has been edited by Suetang (12-02-2003 10:22 PM).]

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-12-01 05:59 PM


Having been through this yourself Sue,
allows you to explain and understand the feelings associated with the loss of a father.

Very nicely done...
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

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2 posted 2003-12-01 07:46 PM


Sue:  A wonderful poem for your friend and I'm sure it will be comforting to her. I lost my dad to cancer many years ago and I miss him all the time. It gets easier to bear as time goes on, but the loss is always there, as you well know!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

NewEnglandlazurlu
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3 posted 2003-12-01 07:56 PM


Sue, you are the perfect person for her to lean on. With your kind and understanding heart, I know your friend will be in good hands.

This is indeed special.
Hugs, Marti

'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.'  
PEACE!!!
Indira Gandhi

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-12-01 08:07 PM


Sue,
Excellent, a lovely write.

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2003-12-01 08:14 PM


Suetang - you are a most caring person, as it shows in this poem to a friend. I'm sure Lisa will appreciate the caring that you have shown and will help...

BC

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6 posted 2003-12-01 09:17 PM



very touching and I hope your friend is doing well.  My thoughts are with her.  Just the thought of losing my Dad hurts deeply, I hope I have a friend like you to turn to when that day comes.  You are a special one!

Hug, Hug, Hug!!!
JD

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time"  ~James taylor~

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7 posted 2003-12-01 10:41 PM




(big angel hugs) And you are just the perfect person to bring her sympathy and comfort, dearest friend, as I know so much how golden your love is for your father and I know through your golden heart Lisa will forever understand how precious her love for her father is and that her father will always guide her from the heavens with loving grace! (angel friendship hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true comforting spirit to all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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8 posted 2003-12-02 03:40 AM


Sue, you are a beautiful friend
Ericc
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9 posted 2003-12-02 11:03 AM


Soothing and healing words.

Eric

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10 posted 2003-12-02 02:13 PM


Sue, this is such a beautiful poem that you
wrote for your friend. I know it will help her
with her grief. You have such a loveing heart, sweet lady.  
Hugs to you and your friend  
Ethel

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11 posted 2003-12-02 09:35 PM


Sue~
What a compassionately beautiful poet-person you are~
This is lovely and I'm sure will offer your friend much comfort~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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pictureme
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12 posted 2003-12-02 10:07 PM


This brought tears to my eyes yet when I read that you wrote it for a friend and I felt the emotion in it, it was like a sad melody. Your friend is very lucky to have a friend like you. I'm sure the write will mean alot to her! Somehow, it spoke to me and brought also a comfort.
Thanks for sharing this.
pictureme :-)

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