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PsychoticBunni
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Mythical Atlantis

0 posted 2003-11-28 06:11 PM




This is for Kiwi
Falling up into the sky...
Looking for the bright white light
Like a moth to a flame
A moth to a flame

Can't you see?
We are Cupid and Psyche
Looking into your sweet face
Is like dying a thousand wonderful deaths

If this heaven let me stay
So I can love you every day
I this is hell... so be it
Let me burn forever


Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

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Duncan
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1 posted 2003-11-28 06:23 PM


"Can't you see?
We are Cupid and Psyche
Looking into your sweet face
Is like dying a thousand wonderful deaths"

Hmmmm...and this is a good thing??  Unique write, I enjoyed...


PsychoticBunni
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2 posted 2003-11-28 09:11 PM


lol. for all u non greek mythology freaks cupid and psyche were forbidden lovers. cupid was a god so he had to keep himself disguised and in the darkness. one night psyche's sister told her to hold a candle to her lover to see his face. of course his godly radiance destroyed her and he felt awful but she died seeing her true love's face. at least that's how they told it in english class.

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

Duncan
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3 posted 2003-11-28 09:18 PM


I must've missed that day...

froggy
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4 posted 2003-11-28 11:04 PM


I like this.
:-)

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5 posted 2003-11-28 11:15 PM


""In the midst of the wood, well-nigh at the fall of the river""


Maybe they married here??  

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

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6 posted 2003-11-29 05:15 AM


cool
PsychoticBunni
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7 posted 2003-11-29 03:02 PM


thx u guys. U make me feel so loved ::blushes:: greeneyes,did u write that verse? if not where was it from? it makes me think.

I give you my number when you sad you call me i make you happy- "Don't Worry Be Happy"

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