Afterspell .....inspired by inkedgoddess and CTOWEN

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Open Poetry #30

Afterspell .....inspired by inkedgoddess and CTOWEN

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2003-11-23 10:17 AM

Afterspell

after the magic, after the spell
while our spirits
still wound together
coast through the dusk world
created only by for us

more sequestered
than a forbidden island
yet altogether familiar,
our muted mutual contours
bare to the edge
of the tide we’ve made

unable and unwilled
to last only beyond release
and drift within
warmth and drift without
surcease, shallow and deep
the waking sleep

how we’ve tumbled together
into the ends of our
selves as we I you blended
into singularity

while the spell winds on
the charm winds threads
into a net of passion
returned returning

surging again

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

1 posted 2003-11-23 10:19 AM

I'm not sure why or how. I read their duet ( /pip/Forum83/HTML/000018.html ) just now and this came from somewhere deeper inside me than my candle will penetrate.

~~J

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-11-23 11:18 AM

returned, returning, surging again,,,,
yea it does come in waves, at times, i know this well,
thanks for being inspired

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-11-23 11:22 AM

Great write.
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-11-23 11:25 AM

Fantastic write..much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2003-11-23 04:54 PM

how we’ve tumbled together
into the ends of our
selves as we I you blended
into singularity

I'll have to go read the inspiration for this beauty... *S* I like that concept... afterspell... and you've written it wonderfully!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2003-11-23 11:08 PM

lovely....beautiful inspiration...

Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2003-11-23 11:27 PM

James~

'unable and unwilled
to last only beyond release
and drift within
warmth and drift without
surcease'

You would already know how the all of this touches me~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2003-12-01 05:57 PM

Jamie...You make magic happen in this!

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