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wintertao
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0 posted 2004-01-06 06:27 PM



There were so many different styles
Ones that flip, the ones that curve…the
Fancy colors and ringtones, oh my.
Anyway, I got one and on the 3rd day  
The calls started. Never gave the number
Out to anyone yet. Who could it be?
I looked at the caller id, somewhere far
Away, somewhere I didn’t know. I now
Know it was New York. And some from
LA. And a few from Miami Bom-bami. Wow!
All these people started leaving messages
On my voice mail, still answered by a
Metro Generic Voice. I was very popular.
I dug it. I still do. I know someday this
Will end and the calls will stop. But till
Then its just fun to hear these interesting
People with names like Free G and MCF
And Chicci tell me theres a rave just off
Broadway at Ernies old place Saturday.
And don’t forget the yahoo. Holla Back.

© Copyright 2004 wintertao - All Rights Reserved
Patricia
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1 posted 2004-01-06 06:36 PM


Very cool...I hope the calls don't get annoying, but for now, it seems like you're having fun.

Enjoyed the read.

Patricia

garysgirl
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2 posted 2004-01-06 06:41 PM


LOL I hope that you're enjoying all those calls. Like
Patricia said, they could get annoying. LOL
Hugs
Ethel

alan6501
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3 posted 2004-01-06 06:59 PM


Sounds like there is just a slight mixup with your phone # and other peoples'. LOL! Funny read.
Ericc
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4 posted 2004-01-07 12:14 PM


Great write...very creative!

Eric

Michelle_loves_Mike
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5 posted 2004-01-07 12:17 PM


......boys and their toys,,,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Kahlil
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6 posted 2004-01-07 12:21 PM


LOL - love how you've captured the event in a write!  ~K~
DavePage
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7 posted 2004-01-07 04:33 PM


I find your thoughts and words as amazing as usual.

You make me laugh and speak of life.

dave

DavePage
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8 posted 2004-01-07 05:03 PM


Wintertao

Your words made me want to publish Phone Number because I think you would like the contrast.

Not competition believe me - I enjoy your writing too much to ever want anything but to read it.

Dave


wickedbeautifulpoetry
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since 2004-01-03
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9 posted 2004-01-07 05:27 PM


amusing and a great read!

-katie-

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