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xaos
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0 posted 2004-01-05 07:50 AM



Seeker

Walk with me, show to me, be the one star
With me talk, and take me far
Part of us, joining must, open the heart.
Us to be, the gentle art

Sing with me, feelings free, a moonlit walk
With me bring, the souls talk
Hold to us, souled to us, sorrow mock
Us to mould, the gentle rock

Dance with me, a melody, of lifted bars
With me chance, the healing scars
Bond to us, a sacred trust, unbroken
Us to be, sworn unspoken

Then amid the dark of night
No fear
Just Light


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Michelle_loves_Mike
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1 posted 2004-01-05 07:56 AM


"Then amid the dark of night
  No fear
  Just light"
to feel that safe,,,,lifetimes are spent searching for it,,,,,enjoyed
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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In Your Poetic Mind
2 posted 2004-01-05 12:09 PM


Hi and Welcome to Passions, we are indeed glad you have joined us.....this is a wonderful post....


Greeneyes~

~~**~~
This morning theres a calm I cant explain
By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone,  
I will bend light pretending it lingers on

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-01-05 12:30 PM


I know how it feels....I do remember
Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2004-01-05 12:34 PM


"sorrow mock"

yes...exactly.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

xaos
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since 2004-01-05
Posts 35

5 posted 2004-01-05 01:12 PM


Hi people and thanks for the comments

I have read some nice stuff in these forums, I didnt get time to comment yet, sorry. I will later tonight though when i finally get to settle down!

Seems like a nice friendly place!

iliana
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6 posted 2004-01-07 01:54 AM


xaos -- I loved this:  
"Dance with me, a melody, of lifted bars
With me chance, the healing scars
Bond to us, a sacred trust, unbroken
Us to be, sworn unspoken"  

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2004-01-07 05:23 AM


~thanks for your words

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
8 posted 2004-01-07 05:37 PM


Sounds like a beautiful healing song ... to find what you seek.
Great rhythm.
Love, Margherita

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