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0 posted 2003-12-14 03:25 AM



twiiist
     body elect
trick
        NOW
sweeping for the towerlove
through the dead-ending
flakes
a sixking mad
for a skinpelt
               never haddend
thrustand GO
Go
   to the end of the whirled
for this
       my ancient
love

       see-him-tarred
flash
          in the down
pouring
        cold

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-12-14 05:40 AM


take
the flats
of shoveling
wide-edged
tossing dust

duet...

one of us
is always there
the other
always
not there yet

and yearning is the stone.



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2 posted 2003-12-18 09:14 PM


Quite an interesting format and form.  I enjoyed the read.

K, yours, too, of course.

-*-*-

Cancer kills us all.  I'm not immortal after all.

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