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PsychoticBunni
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since 2003-10-03
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0 posted 2003-10-03 07:48 PM



I'll Cry

I wish that I could
Take the pain away
Can't You
See how much I care?

You think of hurting Yourself
But I want to help
I'll cry if you hurt
I'll die if you ache

Your pain is mine
As mine is Yours
Won't You?
Let me help

You don't understand
The need I have
To comfort You
But if you hurt

I'll Cry

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Lotus Breeze
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1 posted 2003-10-03 08:21 PM


You write of compassion, which is love
You find much of it here, all make welcome

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-10-03 08:24 PM



Watching someone else hurt themselves,
in whatever way it is being done...
always makes us feel quite helpless.  You
have written a poignant message.  Welcome
to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail
for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-10-03 09:31 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I know this painful feeling ever so well, for I hate to see anyone cry and it too makes me feel helpless even when I really reach out to cildren and bring a smile to their face to comfort them! This is a most gorgeous and compassionate debut, sweet friend, you have a golden heart, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your heartwarming poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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4 posted 2003-10-04 01:32 AM



Yes...a painful situation to be in,
and you've expressed it well.

Welcome to Passions.
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception
5 posted 2003-10-04 02:10 AM


this is beautiful. thank you, and WELCOME!!! to Passions

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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