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Lonely Shadow
Member

since 2000-03-14

Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2003-10-03 08:09 AM

Oh precious beauty
How can it be so
You touched my heart
With only your smile
You warm my broken heart
Once cold and hardened by
The harsh winter's chill
And filled it with such joy
Happiness that only
You could bring
And with just your eyes
You captured my heart
Indeed my very soul
becoming lost in your loving eyes
A slave to your beauty
Watching as the harsh reality
slowly washes away
In the breathtaking brilliance
Of your radiance
Oh if there were words
I could bring to life
That could describe
All the wonders that I see
But even if I could
They would fall utterly short
Oh such a priceless treasure
I have found in you
Your radiant beauty
Your loving heart
Your gentle spirit
Please say you'll stay
In this tender moment
Let me bask in the light
Of your loving heart
Savor the wonders
Within your gentle soul
Just please let me stay
Let me stay with you

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-10-03 08:19 AM

This was warming to the heart, precious to the mind and guiding to the soul...you should give this to her...you'd melt her heart. Lovely write

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-10-03 09:57 AM

WOW...this was lovely! I feel the same as Lee J. Give this to her with a dozen roses, and a fine dining exp. Just lovely!!! Wow this would be amazing, and a trip to the symphony that night would top it off if this were me. Sheesh you got a girl to thinkin' of lovely evenings with lovely company! Very nice to read. Thanks for sharing. This gave me a charge to start my day. How nice is that!!!!

Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-10-03 11:17 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, are you sure this is your screen-name, for your poetry is so beautiful it always chases away shadows! (big hugggssssss) May true loves treasure always glisten in your golden heart, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2003-10-04 02:08 AM

Enjoyed your romantic words of love,
welcome to Passions!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

5 posted 2003-10-04 02:13 AM

enjoyed the read. thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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