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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2003-10-01 10:48 PM



Crystal wave

Is it me on the mountainside?
My heart will not behave,
for it’s she on the ocean tide
on ride of crystal wave.

As I watch her from above-
her eyes reveal the sea
As I can’t help but shout my love-
the waves crash silently.

Puffing hard, the virgin shore,
too red to think that when
she’d never knew of me before
she’d want to know me then.

The salt waves crash her finite name
The well is at its worst
I follow from the place she came
but not to quench my thirst

Crystal wave in hardening sea
Beckon, swallow all of me.

© Copyright 2003 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-10-01 10:50 PM



Crystal

Tim
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2 posted 2003-10-01 11:27 PM


good'un Walt, enjoyed.
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-10-01 11:27 PM


As I watch her from above-
her eyes reveal the sea
As I can’t help but shout my love-
the waves crash silently.

That's a nice view~

n2dmystic
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beyond the doors of perception
4 posted 2003-10-02 04:40 AM


yeah, I agree, "swallow all of me" in your love. beautiful.  thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

vlraynes
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5 posted 2003-10-02 04:43 AM



"Is it me on the mountainside?
My heart will not behave,
for it’s she on the ocean tide
on ride of crystal wave."



Love this, Walty...simply beautiful...
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Dark Angel
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6 posted 2003-10-02 09:20 AM


Keep em comin Walty... Have missed you.

Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2003-10-02 06:16 PM






(smiles) Oh Walty, I absolutely love this, dearest friend, and may the sea foam rise all over you and the undertow of love bring you under, sweet friend, I love this, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2003-10-02 07:00 PM


wayoutwalt
Glad to see you back.

cruz
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9 posted 2003-10-11 01:45 AM


this one takes me to a place with some wonderful thoughts of the beauty of women but there's a realization of how illusive they can be. especially liked the silence of the crashing waves! thanks for sharing your words...


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