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Open Poetry #29

the candle

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

0 posted 2003-09-28 12:34 PM

Your bitterness
crackles
in the flame
Sputters
your bright light

glider

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2003-09-28 12:44 PM

very nicely done. Sometimes the shorter the poem the greater the impact.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-09-28 12:48 PM

Enjoyed this, glider.
Quite a powerful statement made
with just a few well-chosen words.
Nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-09-28 03:41 AM

definitely very cool

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2003-09-28 09:38 AM

wandering glider - the flame crackles with bitterness, yes, I see what you mean...

BC

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-09-28 09:40 AM

wandering,

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