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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-09-27 12:21 PM



12:01

Those words that use to show,
the ones I wore for you
and you only, their sheerness
trading for kisses,
their treasure seen
for more than its worth
have peaced my puzzle,
completed the mystery
giving me a gift of freedom
and a belief in tomorrow.

Candlelit tonight, the walls reflect
the warmth I feel when thoughts
rise and a blush appears
until a coolness follows
the after-thoughts of you...and
time tells me, tomorrow is here.

No longer dreading the footsteps
that were too large to fill,
no longer fearing "the touch of more",
I am resolved and have settled back,
loosening my stance, allowing the mirror's eyes
to respond in smile and tonight in kindness,
my arms wrap around myself in affection for
the friendships I embrace, showing me
that I am never really alone.


Thank You,
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2003-09-27 12:24 PM


You have just described the secret of true happiness, Maurine
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-09-27 12:25 PM


what are you doing up so late, Deer one?


p.s. it's Maureen
M

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3 posted 2003-09-27 12:41 PM


I needed to read this tonight..
I know that you know what we know, and all that!  
Have a nice Saturday visit.   Hugs Maur~

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-09-27 12:42 PM


are you on?  for a few moments of "talk"

M

not sleepy enough yet on this end...

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5 posted 2003-09-27 04:43 PM




(smiles) Oh Maureen, the evening is a wonderful time to introspect ones self, dearest friend, you are just so special to us all and you deserve extra special angel hugs for this lovely write! (kiss on cheek) Now give yourself another big hug, yay, you deserve it always, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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6 posted 2003-09-27 11:52 PM


very uplifting

I love this

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7 posted 2003-09-28 12:54 PM


enjoyed ,,,

                                                            

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8 posted 2003-09-28 12:59 PM


No, never that. You're surrounded.

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