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Whiskey Mornin Blues
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Whiskey Mornin Blues |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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the dooryard open up yawnin black moanin I play my silver whiskeywet lazylike my daddy told me used to play it hard when I was fine n' young spittin in that can turnin the flash on Ahhhheeeeeeeeee Boy! count them teeth with m'tongue not so fine now, huh Boy? now days the silver sing for me spittin the blue yeah I see you walkin on Ole Jack a fine mornin to ya Sir you come round again tomorrow maybe you get lucky then for today? is another one for me |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Ahhhheeeeeeeeee Boy! count them teeth with m'tongue not so fine now, huh Boy? now days the silver sing for me spittin the blue yeah I see you walkin on Ole Jack a fine mornin to ya Sir you come round again tomorrow maybe you get lucky then for today? is another one for me" Bri?...you amaze me, my friend...always. I just love this...and smiling here... just because I get to read you tonight...  Hugs, you...  When the power of love overcomes the |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
A wonderful write to read before bedtime.Nicely done. Crystal |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
stumble thoughts in clarity... so brilliant. Written with the inflections, in the jolting jerky haphazard journey that is all too familiar. Oh no. Smile. This one does not slip by uncelebrated. Madviking poet, SIR-- you have those silent eyes in the dark that actually SEE...and yer fingers do good work too.  love THIS. lov-you--YOU....  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I heard this...loud and clear...  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like it! I love the blues and this is just like something that would come out of the Charlie Patton era. Good stuff! Eric |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bri? Helllllllllllll Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaa (ask Ed) this made me think of that *smile* xxoo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I think it's time for another round...grin When the power of love overcomes the |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
SHHHHH.... not so loudly..... This is, unfortunately all to well known... and- fortunatley- al;l to accurately described... Great job. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sorry i missed this earlier..damn it come back bri where ya been? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
brian - the blues, what else is can there be... BC |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
brian...You write with such excellent atmosphere!! |
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