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Wait for me |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
I keep waiting for better days. My turn is just around the corner,very soon. All my life I let in all the strays. Better days might come with the new moon. Wait for me, someone will. No more tears or sorrow. My dreams will be fullfilled. Who knows, maybe even tomarrow. I'll wake up in a beautiful garden. All my fears will be gone. I don't exactly know when, But I keep trying, traveling on. Someone will wait for me. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
yes tomorrows open anew keep reaching and sharing your heart and hopefully dreams will come true Hope |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes... someone will... not always in the time we'd choose... but in the time that's right. *S* Beautiful! *S* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Julia: how your writing is blossoming, My God this is lovely: All my life I let in all the strays. Better days might come with the new moon.  for you Hey pssst look ont the boards I left something there for you Susie xxoo |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hi Sis! It's so good to see you still writing. And this... "I'll wake up in a beautiful garden. All my fears will be gone. I don't exactly know when, But I keep trying, traveling on. Someone will wait for me." Is the way of things sometimes...But, we do keep moving on...learning. That is the way of US! Love ya! Brother Ed |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
are we all looking for someone stopped in the blurring rush? it's like disembarking from a plane from Anywhere and you are looking for the sign... that has your name on it and you try not to look at those still in the airport leaning resignedly against a post with all of their dirty laundry weighing heavy on the shoulders because we might end up... waiting with them for the sign with our name this was sweet PJ thank you Brian |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The nice thing about a new day is it brings new chances. Very well done, I enjoyed it much. |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
Susie, where do I look "On the boards?" Brian, what you wrote is exactly right. I'm not as talented as you obvious are. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Y'touched my heart pouring jewels. An appropriate name for you too. I know this one very well. *hearthugs* |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julia, I really like this. It has lots of hope and promise within....And, the poem Suzie wants you to see is at the top page now......You can click on this link.... /pip/Forum82/HTML/002680.html Hugs to you, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, we all are cheering you on and know soon you will find all you are hoping for! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are special, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
Julia Everyone is talent talent is the Southern Gate to the City everyone got one! I just meant to show my vigorously nodding head to what you said I felt it... and wanted to say thank you smile **attention maintenance associates! we have an Obvious in aisle 4! aisle 4 , maintenance..**  keep writing you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
keep the faith...and share some with me  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
....psst....these ARE better days...and you've definitely got the seeds. Go plant. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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