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Velvet (For Julia - PouringJewels) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Hushabye, my child, close thine eyes to the night Resounding wave, embody the brine Hold thy palm to the sky, let fear flee in flight Hushabye, my child, close thine eyes to the night Cleanse your wounds in the sea when the stars shine just right It is not thy soul which you need to align Hushabye, my child, close thine eyes to the night Resounding wave, embody the brine [This message has been edited by littlewing (11-05-2003 04:48 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is very beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you do these kind of writes so well, a natural u are, a sea goddess, to the inkedgoddess |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Thank you Susie, For writing this for her...I'm sure she'll love it. (I just have to let her know it's here waitng for her) This is beautiful sweety, and she needs a little beauty in her life just about now. Kiss! Hug! Other stuff! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
such a tender song this was so nice Sue (and I love it when I show up in a poem...) Brine |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I really wanted this to keep going and find the chorus Sue, it reads like a beautiful song. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This has a sing song lilt to it Susie. I enjoyed it and I am sure she will also. Well done sweetie. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you loner so good to see you reading me ahh I like that Michele . . . thank you what a beautiful reply *smile* Thank you V! Baby? no thank you's needed she is special to me and hoping she likes this or at least it brings some sort of comfort Yes, other stuff *smile*  thank you Hey Bri . . *laughing here* I knew you would claim that as soon as I wrote it, actually I thought Karen would get it first thank you *smile* BPW aww Sharon that is so sweet . . . maybe I should have kept it going a bit thank you for that insight Thank you Donna, I didnt see that sing song to it until I just read it Julia?  *smile* Thanks guys xxoo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sue, this was so sweet and a gentle reminder there is light and love in this life. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
brilliant!!! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gah, this is beautiful.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sue...it is beautiful like a lullaby and brought some comfort to me even though it wasn't meant for me. Thankyou for that. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Eric *smile* ahh Susan thank you , yes yes there is I never used to think so either Thank you Brad *smile* Gah - Meg thank you *smiling* Martie - that is the swetest thing you could say and it is meant for whomever needs it . . . Julia was on my mind and I thought she needed a hug thank you Thank guys xxoo |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is precious.... hugsssss LW you have a touching heart....Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
soothed. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, I just know Julia will love this always, sweet friend, this is a most beautiful form poem that serpentines blessings bestowed to her! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
Yes, I needed a hug."Let fear flee in flight" Easier said than done. Yes, Susie I'm a mess. I have never been financially in trouble. I have a senior girl "sunshinemc" to worry about. Thank you for caring! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
LittleOne, this is so sweet of you to do... but, that's because you're such a sweet and caring person. Thank you for sharing. Hugs Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, Suzie..it looks like I was the last one that replied, so I'll just bump it back to the top now, so Julia can find it.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you so much Lauren OMG I am a miracle worker I soothed Raph *smile thank you Noah I do love this form, yes thank you so much Ahh Julia, I do know I have a lil Egg here myself . . scary most days isnt it? You look at this child and think OMG . . . they depend on ME? Glad it helped, hoping it did and soon, you shall see , something will come to you . . it always does Susie xxoo Thank you Ethel I learned from the best  thanks for the bump too Thanks guys xxoo |
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