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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-11-05 01:57 AM


My God, she tried
so hard to be
a second soul
one second free

instead we danced
one second free
and lost ourselves
in what would be

and here we are
and now we see
one second lost
but hell, its free

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-11-05 03:28 AM


wow
inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-11-05 07:03 AM


it sounds like one second gained, actually
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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3 posted 2003-11-05 07:56 PM


yes indeed gained, it is free
*smile*
nice writing Jason
xxoo

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-11-05 07:58 PM


This is neat, Jason...
I like it.
Hugs  
Ethel

LeeJ
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5 posted 2003-11-06 03:41 PM


good one
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