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Open Poetry #29

Song and Sentiment

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-10-28 11:18 AM

To sit unaware
and spine to be fingered
by opening strum
that crawls from behind
dragged and sketched from flesh
is to be hunted by skilled monster
of song and sentiment

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-10-28 11:50 AM

Excellent write as always, sweet Gemma.
I've missed you around here, sweet girlie.

Heart hugs to you

Ethel Mae

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-10-28 11:59 AM

gemjop,
It reads like an add, enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-10-28 12:52 PM

they are good at that, aren't they?

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-10-28 01:04 PM

Ohhh..yes...

Exactly where my mind is today!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-10-28 02:07 PM

yessss, ironically thinking the same as I'm listening to an acoustic version of Oasis' Whatever slowly turning into All the young Dude's...

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-10-29 12:17 PM

ahh I see you have been searching . . .
*smile*
Oh gem . . goodness
wouldnt it be easier of we could just close our eyes sometimes?
xxoo

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