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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-10-17 10:46 AM



Purple smears,
twisted words
in surrealistic shards of smoke,
clear slowly
from the electric canvas of my mind;
empty latex passions
fashion anger
in strict symbolic silhouettes,
sculpted
from a haunting rhythm's broken balance,
the drummed atonal tattoos
are hammered on the nude aesthetic
of someone else's politician's lies.

©2003 by icebox

© Copyright 2003 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-10-17 10:52 AM


(chuckling).. but how did you really feel about this?

love the images used and the tone... nice work as usual Mr Ice.


angelblueyes
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Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-10-17 10:52 AM


You know I absolutely love the way you write.The way you see things as everyone else, but then write with your own words brings a great perception for others to view.You don't know it, but you teach me so much in your writes.
Crystal

Martie
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California
3 posted 2003-10-17 11:50 AM


Wow!  The visuals in this are fantastic!
wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
4 posted 2003-10-17 12:02 PM


Well said, Iceboxdude


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