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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-10-17 07:30 AM



The Songs Never Fade

Visualised the scenes
We lovingly acquired
Both soaring toward
The passion required

With his musical style
Me dancing the beat
Minds alike travelled
Yet could never meet

His music to my ears
Love playing tenderly
My lips spilling words
Whispering intimately

Scripting a love affair
Romantics conveyed
Brown eyes met blue
The songs never fade

HopeĀ©2003

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-10-17 09:33 AM


Brown eyes met Blue  *s...

You need to cross that ocean or two, Hope and come for a visit.

hugss
M

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2 posted 2003-10-17 12:11 PM


And may it never fade.For your song is beautiful to hear and a wondrous thing to share.
Crystal

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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2003-10-17 12:13 PM


Hope~

this is such a beautiful expression of love.....eyes meeting and songs never fading...lovely..


Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

HopeS
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4 posted 2003-10-17 12:16 PM


Hi Maureen , after knowing me all those years , you know how I would love to be there
Hope

By the way , I did a newer version and corrected the last verse but it must have flipped over a page

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-10-17 12:16 PM


Beautiful as always, Hope.
Thanks, too, for going to my new web
site. As you saw, it's still under
construction, but please go back because
I'll be adding more of my poems regularly.
My site at http://poetrypoem.com/ethelsheartpoems
has more of my poems.
I love your website, too.
Thanks, lady.
Hugs to you,  
Ethel


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-17-2003 12:30 PM).]

HopeS
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6 posted 2003-10-17 12:19 PM


Thank you Crystal , yes we have been 7 years  heart to heart , although oceans apart
Hope
P.S I did correct the last verse , but the newer version must have slipped over a page

HopeS
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7 posted 2003-10-17 12:23 PM


yes over 7 years , many hours I have spent , playing his songs he lovingly sent

Hope

P.S I did correct the last verse , a nwer version of this poem seems to have slipped past the old one

HopeS
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8 posted 2003-10-17 12:26 PM


thank you Ethel for your kind reply and glad you enjoyed your visit to my pages although I have not worked on them in ages

Hope

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