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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-23 06:07 AM



Never To Give Up


in all the spaces
near and far
faith is
my boulder
in the tiniest
grain of sand

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
icebox
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in the shadows
1 posted 2003-09-23 07:21 AM


Split a piece of wood
and I am there
lift a stone
and I am with you

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2003-09-23 07:22 AM


thank you
LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-09-23 07:35 AM


Good Morning dear Lady, and awesome and most wise way to look at all things...thank you
Zinsser
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Calif.
4 posted 2003-09-23 09:21 AM


never give up....
Your worth more then that....and made of more grains of sand then you know

[This message has been edited by Zinsser (09-23-2003 09:23 AM).]

vandana
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5 posted 2003-09-23 09:27 AM


enjoyed
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
6 posted 2003-09-23 10:24 AM


Seriously, H.. You make my head feel all .. dizzy..

in a good way.

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7 posted 2003-09-23 11:16 PM


Perfect -- and such a haunting way to say it. You will never be alone.

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gemjop
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8 posted 2003-09-26 12:03 PM


  
passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2003-09-27 11:50 PM


thanks for the inspiration
alisa
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10 posted 2003-09-27 11:57 PM


terrific....i love it..
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