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Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2003-10-12 07:17 AM




Artwork by Sunny

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

© Copyright 2003 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Marty Baird
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since 2003-09-20
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1 posted 2003-10-12 07:20 AM


Great mix of art & words.  Hope I can learn to do what U do.
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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2 posted 2003-10-12 07:21 AM


fabulous penning and pic,,,

the clouds look like the ones in my latest post tangerine sky.

The evening sky tinted with
shades of tangerine and an
aura drifting through clouds
of white ends the day as I
enter the darkness of night

soon the luna will come to
give me serenity and the stars
will twinkle high above as I
sleep and dream into the night

a dreamcatcher web hanging
in the window casts a shadow
upon the wall bringing comfort
that evil shall not prevail in my
dreams as I rendezvous with
you tonight



                                                                                

[This message has been edited by QjQ (10-12-2003 07:24 AM).]

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2003-10-12 07:23 AM


Hi Marty, and thank you!  You'll find that here at Passions, we all learn from each other, and if there's anything you'd like help on, just say the word...that's how I learned to do this!  I see we haven't met before, so Welcome to Passions, and it's nice to have you at the family table!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
4 posted 2003-10-12 07:26 AM


Hi QjQ, and thank you!  Could be the ones...I use PSP7 as my main graphics prog, and then do my own thing with it.  So, it could be one of those common internet patterns.  Loved seeing you here today...~S~   Just noticed your addition...that is gorgeous wording, and I can see where the clouds fit your words!!!!  I think we're sharing a little creative telepathy, eh, and that's great!!!!  

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (10-12-2003 07:29 AM).]

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2003-10-12 07:40 AM



She is patient, this Lady...
Well done, Sunny....

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
6 posted 2003-10-12 08:04 AM


Dear Sunnyone, this is very beautiful indeed, the art work is wonderful and the poetry dances on the page, just a small suggestion maybe for your last lines,

"Which promises the gift of love
And patience while she waits"

I am not being picky, just thought this might help with the flow of your great work.

Take care my friend, well done.

Sincerely
Rick

Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
7 posted 2003-10-12 08:13 AM


Hi Sun-sis, and thank you!!  Yes, sometimes the waiting is so very hard, but in the long run it is worth it, as I found out! ~S~

Hi Rick, and thank you!  Yes, excellent suggestion, and now if I could only go back and edit the graphic! However, once it's saved in an art program with the text, you can't do editing, so I am going to have to leave as is...but I certainly agree with you, and appreciate your thoughts!  That's how we learn, eh?  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2003-10-12 08:29 AM


Sunnyone
Excellent write, enjoyed.

Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
9 posted 2003-10-12 09:51 AM


Hi Seymour, and thank you!  I enjoy it every time we meet up on these wonderful blue pages!!!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
10 posted 2003-10-12 12:18 PM


But yet inside her
lives the dream
the gift from hand and fate.

Liked that verse especially.
This is such a pretty poem Sunnyone,
and the sentiment is lovely.

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
11 posted 2003-10-12 12:40 PM


Beautiful art work and a lovely poem.
Thank you for sharing both beauties.
Love Bon-Bon

garysgirl
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12 posted 2003-10-12 01:02 PM


Sunny, this is beautiful beyond words....the poem and the artwork. One of these days I'm going to learn how to put the poem onto the graphic. It's so beautiful.
Hugs  
Ethel

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13 posted 2003-10-12 03:13 PM




(smiles) Oh Sunnyone, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I know this feeling ever so well and it makes me sad sometimes knowing how my dream girl must be yearning for me too much in heartache and tears and when she may find me! (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, the artwork is sooooooo lovely too, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

pandonov
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence
14 posted 2003-10-12 03:19 PM


the knights of the round table are in tears. beautiful
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