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Open Poetry #29

Vast Sky

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-09-22 04:46 PM

Loneliness, a grand canyon
flying open spaces
vast blue sky
winds along the horizon
updrafts gliding wings
release of adrenaline
finding yourself
in the heavens,
the greatest universe.

D.Lester Young
Somewhere in America not on company time 09/20/03

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2003-09-22 05:11 PM

I like the way you did this. Terse, only the needed words and none of the fat. It leant movement and energy to the poem.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-22 05:34 PM

enjoyed,,,

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-09-28 02:51 AM

Nicely said...enjoyed this.
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

4 posted 2003-09-28 03:19 AM

vivid - simple, but not simplistic. Thank you. Peace, Joe

from the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-09-28 03:21 AM

and that is one tall sky

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