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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-10-08 06:51 AM


How can it be?
The whole multipartedness?
Of every instance, reflecting
The images, stay in tune, though I turn
The music to another station, yet this offering
Is ever present to my senses, against my will
Even though alone in a private sphere
One of which is alive and illuminated
Silence strains as I catch a whispering
Mingled and thickened with a too enhancing
Fragrance of a magical bittersweet sadness
For all the traffic to bear
Autumns end, brings about a greater question
A passive and potential sensibility
Of which I may modify, thirst is so expensive
Setting down the book, gazing at familiar things
An independence of objects is now only an appearance?
And my illusions of liberty as I fastened the chamber
But, my words were long and honest…..strong and reasonably
Filled with a lovely country home. Pulsating secure!

The stream inspiring fills the attention with fondness
Of the fairest forms…revealing eyes behold a melting softness
Of the only Paradise…the only paradise in this living world.

For all I see explores the classics beating down on my breast
Willfully comes a sweetened joy, of Tuscany and Elysium
Where mossy caverns yield a generous day
I am thy heavenly born radiance oppressed from ancient guides
Minds made better by their presence, with primrose in their paths

We live in pulses, stirring to some undying music
Breathing with a sway of flesh, for me the roses of romance
Unending…
I am to higher reverence, mixed with love and time
Being gathered forever, may I strive the world’s uneven charge?
Gives us a chance, to rise to mid-afternoons,
And I kiss your memory, setting fire to my home
I’m poor and starved, pondering every hour
Truth be known, the greatest Towers on Earth
Are within the long nights, where people sing and dance
Brief as a dream, long as the day
Firming stone, besets my way
I will dive into the hungry sea
Without fear…kissing the comfort of obscurities
Whatever may come…my purse is empty
But rich with consolations, for I would miss my secret inner thoughts
And I shall dull the storm making a glove of you
Keeping my fingers warm and dignity to our theme
Complicated weights shall task to trace
When my fine poetic forces start to muse
And perchance I shall evolve from that
Blistery but sweet winter shall behave with a treaty
In the nakedness of wool
Perhaps that sight you’ll miss, I don’t know
But the sage of Tarpum Bay awaits, and I am woman
And I have learned, to do well without you
For the divine omnipresence streams faith to inspire
What would leave will term a tender smile
Spilling all from tongue and long sleeves
A large sum of golden amber beginnings
I am ripe with readiness, to share what all is rhyme
Within the wind of summer nights and lullabies
Of a charm….be it, in the moonlight, devouring my soul
I await that perfect moment, when how sweet the moonlight
Seas….rock wildly devoted
And I’ll tell the world he…holds me closely
Nibbling on the evening lights of my ear, eyes, and mouth
Where such mortal beauty lives
Within the tresses of his hands and mind
Falling into the flesh of affection, for I want to know every inch of him
Every breath, tracing with my fingers, the tenderness of his heart
Where mind, body and soul hails
The light of life….and the watery path shall be
Fragments of time…exploding with truth and knowledge
For from each other, by each other, we live and breathe
With the celebrated rose!




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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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1 posted 2003-10-08 07:13 AM


absolutely terrific,,,

                                                                        

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-10-08 09:33 AM


Lee,
I don't know how such excellent writing can slip away. I would bring it back for a second try. And can only quote
"For from each other, by each other, we live and breathe
With the celebrated rose!"
As an exceptional end.

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