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exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-08-13 08:30 PM


can anyone really explain
this feeling almost everyone gets
when they realize the person they love
doesnt love them back
can anyone understand how much it hurts
enless its happend to them
do they know much much it hurts
it feels like your going to throw up
like a part of you was ripped out
sometimes i wish it had never happend to me
and i was never able to write about it
and i never found out i was a poet
sometimes i wish i had never fallen in love
because sometimes the feelings become so unbearable...

[This message has been edited by exhale (08-13-2003 08:33 PM).]

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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
1 posted 2003-08-13 08:48 PM


That's amoooooooooore... hurts like hell don't it..but when it does work exhale..siiiiiiiiiiiiggggghhhhhhhs...THAT'S why we put our self through it
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