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icebox
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0 posted 2003-08-12 01:10 PM



Running footsteps ring
blood flowing freely in rain
vengeance tastes like fear


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1 posted 2003-08-12 01:34 PM



What hidden secrets
wounds the soul to ooze its life
Secret, hidden whys

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2 posted 2003-08-12 02:16 PM


Chilling.   Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

GG
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3 posted 2003-08-12 03:29 PM


this reminds me of nights I've run aimlessly out in cold, bleak, rain just trying to keep myself from whatever anger I'm feeling... ah very descriptive in so few words.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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4 posted 2003-08-12 04:34 PM


Like fresh lava -- harsh but good.

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5 posted 2003-08-12 05:12 PM



Definitely not a snapshot to be framed--mind you, I think you already did frame it!


EA


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6 posted 2003-08-12 05:26 PM


This has a darkness to it, but is still good.
angelblueyes

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7 posted 2003-08-12 08:35 PM


I thought it tastes like chicken? Sorry a little levity..tiptoes away slowly
icebox
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8 posted 2003-08-13 08:27 PM


Sunshine ~ "hidden whys" very good!

Nightshade ~ Yes, a little.

GG ~ I used to do that when I was younger.  Can't anymore.

Ratleader ~ Great image!  Thanks

Earth Angel ~ No, no one was framed. *smile*

angelblueyes ~ Well, it was dark. *smile*

Aenimal ~ Now THAT made me laugh!!!  Thanks!

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