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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-08-10 11:51 PM



Set Adrift

Ink pen on empty
Last thoughts written on paper
The rest set adrift

"Due to budget cuts, the light at the end of the tunnel, has been turned off" author unknown

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symphony_of_thoughts
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1 posted 2003-08-11 01:21 AM


I liked this poem. Short but sweet.  It really shows how when you write a peom sometimes you have so many thoughts sifting around in your mind that you can't pick one.  But in the end, you have to pick the one that comes from your heart most and that you can express most fluently from pen to paper.
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3 posted 2003-08-11 02:03 AM


Hey! You're way too good at these.


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