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Darkness Surrounding
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Darkness Surrounding |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
This black heart retains more life than you see this black heart follows freedoms laughter this black heart opens to the world of screams that vision comes and silence is whispering dream. This black heart has eyes that see the land this black heart cannot forgive my soul this black heart finds love when it commands where the ancients walked, then left us dreaming. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow...awesome write! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where HAVE you been, m'friend? We've sorely missed your poetry... please stay awhile, and lighten that darkened heart! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
that's sooooooo dark.. have you thought to put it in the "dark poetry" room..? I know temptress would like it... just a thought. lucky |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I've read some of your poems in the other forums. I wondered why you never posted here. This is a good write, even if it is dark. I hope to read more of your work.  Hugs  Ethel |
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