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Queasy... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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You twist Your words Plunging Deep Within the pit of my stomach Pushing me down Further On my knees Your unwanted Devoted attention Ruins my appetite And when I feel Your unwanted shadow Caressing my dreams I wake Dripping Saturated Feeling a bit weak in the pit of my stomach I don't know How it came to this Our converstations have come down to this I feel queasy Each time I think of you I just want to regurgitate the words once spoken I just need to get you out of my system Saltine crackers Obviously not the solution Got to drown you with gingerale I mean You've made me feel uncomfortable When you made something out of nothing I just Got to do something I can't continue talking to you When you constantly make me feel queasy.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-06-2003 02:07 AM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Ooh! This rocks.. I understand..he makes me feel sick sometimes.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ah...so you're the one who has been seeing my husband!  He makes you queasy TOO?  Seriously tho, lady, this does indeed ROCK.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love how you spilled your guts with this write. Sorry that you are in such an unsettled state, but it makes for great grist for your poetic mill!   EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
LMAO @ Karen . . . Kris, Woman, I must say you blow me away at how well you can toss your feelings out there with vengeance and beauty. The crackers surely will not do it, try a huge bowl of peanut butter chocolate ice cream. It will not take anything away, but will make you feel happy for several minutes afterwards LOL This is so powerful . . . and I kinda know what ya mean *smile* xxoo |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I love how this comes out- like you are talking and trying to find the right words. awsome insanity is not a crime |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
This one takes the cake Great write Hmmm Things I wanted to say but never did Rogue |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
LOL@Karen... been there, felt it! Great job !!!! Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
*nod* You continue to amaze me.  Kielo I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me.... |
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