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lucky
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since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2003-08-04 01:47 AM

drifting reminisce

sporadic drifts

of reminisce flutter down
like autumn leaves fragile
whispers split from limbs

‘ol drifting memories
ripped from out

a picture
no one
would
believe
a chaotic

mixed up yesterday
when there wasn’t time to see

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~

[This message has been edited by lucky (08-04-2003 01:50 AM).]

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-08-04 02:15 AM

I think I've been there. It makes my head hurt. You worded it well. ~K~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-08-04 05:14 AM

excellent!

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

3 posted 2003-08-04 11:27 AM

I thought this mighthave gotten a better
response... maybe it needs some work.,
but thank you just the same.

dale

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

4 posted 2003-08-04 11:58 AM

lucky...it is that way, remembering. A time when you can really look at something, move it slowly before your eyes, because when it happened, it happened so fast. Very insightful!

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

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Southern Abstentia

5 posted 2003-08-04 02:55 PM

Ratleader

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6 posted 2003-08-04 11:46 PM

These shapes of yours drive my dyslexia into the purple zone, but they're worth it!

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lucky
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since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

7 posted 2003-08-05 12:30 PM

thanks Ed,

I developed it some years back now. My mother in law couldn't handle the prose format and wasn't reading my/our poetry so I put it into a shape. Now she thinks it heavenly... "the things we do for mother" she was also my english teacher in Jr. High. What a life it has been.

thanks forbearing, dale

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

8 posted 2003-08-06 01:40 PM

Such enormous caverns of memories open in me when I read this. Your words touch me deeply.

Well written!

.

The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.

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