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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-08-02 01:25 AM


TWENTY OR LESS…#130

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon


mushrooming ceremonies
misplaced cheering
multitudes flag waving

bowing, I desire
the end of

freedom


found in blood


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-08-02 08:00 AM



Not the best of ways
to find peace, is it,
m'friend?

Good job.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-08-02 08:16 AM


MARK,
Well done.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-08-02 08:18 AM


Excellent Mark!
Smiles~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-08-02 09:38 AM


You say more in 20 or less than many of us can say in 100 or more!

Warm hugs,
EA

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Gaia
5 posted 2003-08-02 11:04 AM




huge truths
wrapped in tiny packages
are the greatest gifts

thank you for this gift, Mark


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in the pouring rain
6 posted 2003-08-02 01:11 PM


* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2003-08-02 08:24 PM


Sunshine, unfortunately only pieces from that method...

Thank you, Sy -- if it could only be undone...

Nancy:

EA:  that's a mighty high compliment -- thank you!

Kacy, you're welcome and thanks to you as well.  Perphaps the greatest gifts are packages of Truth exposed with no wrapping...?

Riley:  that's a nice contagion --

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

angelblueyes
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8 posted 2003-08-02 08:27 PM


You are the master of few words that speak volumes. You're one of my favorite poets.
angelblueyes

Kethry
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9 posted 2003-08-02 08:33 PM


the depth of your words mean less is ALWAYS more.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Mistletoe Angel
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10 posted 2003-08-02 09:37 PM




(big hugggssssssss) I must be frank. When I was in Ireland and I heard about Saddam's two sons killed in a bloodbath and the pictures being released all across TV and prints in celebration, I was angered. That to me was barbarianism, in fact sacrilege, like castrating a dead horse. They could easily have arrested them and I don't see why everyone should be celebrating, when our children lose their innocence and murder becomes acceptable in this society! (wipes tears) How sick this nation can be sometimes, God Bless You for speaking out, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-02-2003 09:37 PM).]

QjQ
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11 posted 2003-08-03 12:53 PM


excellent,, you expressed this well..
MARK V SHELDON
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12 posted 2003-08-03 01:29 AM


Crystal...  and now you've left me speechless...  but I am truly honored.  Thank you.

Kethry...  always is a strong word, but I try...

Hey Noah -- hasn't been the same 'round here without you.  Thanks for the thoughts.  Maybe someday humanity will advance...???

QjQ:  thank you, sir.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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